Recount of swimming

My Plan for a Recount

Title of my story:

Swimming safety

Orientation: Use keywords to explain

Where	School pool	Here are some connectives you may want to use instead of THEN to move your story on: after a while      afterwards      at once     at this moment at this point       before that     finally     first (second third etc...) here            in the end       lastly        later on      meanwhile next     next time     now      on another occasion previously       since     soon      straightaway   until then when      whenever      while
When	13th of March 2017
Who	Hank & rest of RM 1

These are the things I am writing about in the right order: (Use keywords only - you can add details when you write your story.)

Event 1	Any swim to the length of the pool
Event 2	Backstroke
Event 3	Breaststroke with head up
Event 4	School record gliding the length of the pool

WALHT write a recount. Success Criteria: An orientation that describes where, when and who. A sequence of events in the right order. Connectives to lead the reader on ( e.g. first, next, after a while, a moment later, at last, finally) A conclusion. A personal comment.

Start with your title below.  

Swimming Safety  

On 13th March we went swimming to learn to be safe in the lake with A guy called hank and the rest of the class and room 15, but not the people who forgot their toggles it was odd that we got changed in room luck it was behind the board so we can get some privacy from the boys, Hank didn’t get in the pool he just gave instruction from the outside.

First we kicked and warmed up our feet bye kicking hard. my feet were boiling hot since they were in the cold for a long time and it felt better to get in a warm place finally, but my arms were already warm because of my towel and I was more comfortable on the flat surface of the pool the outside was bumpy   

Next we did whatever kind of swim we want, I did Dolphin dive as it's my favourite Kind of swim. Hank said “it’s not a race!” I listened to him.This length tern was easy as!

After that we did the most hard thing ever it was doing freestyle  till you need a breath if you need a breath you have to flip and swim like that for the rest of the time till you get to the end! Finally we were finished but still there was one more lesson, well not a lesson but a record we had to not swim but we had to glide to the end!  Just push of!

At last I got to the end and climb out the end it was freezing cold then everyone was racing to the class I still felt cold but my uniform got wet by my hair.